Artist-Lost's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Plane]

Very crisp details on the subject and loose painting on the rest make for a great focus on concept. Great work on this one. I would love to see it in a game.

[Collaboration Breeze.]

Awesome work on this one. It's nice to see the characters in a different genra style. Lets see, Pico, Nene, Tankman? Not sure who the other girl is but I may have missed the flash.

Kuoke responds:

Read Luwano's comment.

[Guru Larry Design]

Very nice style.

[The Yeti is not forgotten]

I'm confused, you left out the shadow under the yeti, and his tracks lead up to the kid and stop way before they get to the yeti. Also they should get a lot bigger as they get closer to the yeti because of how far back you pushed the cave. While soft brushes can be used effectively if used cleanly, they mostly end up distracting from the good bits of the picture as they have here.

The light source is very spotlight/flashlight looking, which is fine, but it doesn't match up on the kid. Actually based on what you have here, the present is the light source.

As for the stars, if you do your starry sky first, or on its own layer, you will find that it is much easier to prevent them from clustering around the edges which will give it more of a randomized look.

Now the good bits. Your line work is nice and clean, which I always love. However when put against the blurry shadows it really looses it's charm. The textures are a nice addition, particularly at the base of the tree behind the yeti.

Saminat responds:

Thanks for the critique! That's exactly what I'm looking for, and I'm going to be making several changes before the calendar goes up.

[Cyber Satyr]

Nice, this would be an awesome game sprite.

[Tainted Goods]

I'm hoping this one gets the October slot. Great job!

deathink responds:

Keep your fingers crossed!

[Brewery]

very WoWish feeling., The main entryway is my favorite. Big old stone and wood frame, ity bity swinging doors.

[Demoness]

Very nicely done! I love the radiant light that frames her. It's got me wanting to watch King of Thorns again.

[Descend into Madness]

Epic Madness. Great work on getting that feeling of movement, and I love how the subtle background fills this one out.