Artist-Lost's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Pearl]

Very nice rendering. The rat seems to have a different light source, but I still like it.

[Rest In Peace, Edd Gould]

For some reason I could see Edd posing like that lol.

[Omega Character Sheet]

Why does the only girl have the only normal name? I agree on the bodies, all the guys have the same body type.

[Weakest Link]

Aah My first thought was OMG count chocula!

[Synthia]

Not sure why the ratIng is bellow 4 on this but I think it's pretty good, great work with the glow effect.

[The Watchtower]

Pro Art

Amazing work, I always love this style of painting, unfortunately I can never seem to get the subtle shading differences to create shapes without lines in my style. Which is ok for some things, but for backgrounds, your technique is perfect. Great frame choice too. You've done a great job creating that hidden compositional circle to keep my eyes on the page. Do you mind if I ask what sort of techniques or artists you follow?

[Geats]

Some pro level work...

Not sure why the votes are so low for this one, maybe a lot of people voting low to boost there own shot for the front page. I give it a 9 just because I usually prefer to see full illustrations, not just concepts, (Backgrounds are a good test of an illustrators skill)

First thing, the light angle that you have on him should be casting a few shadows that are currently a bit off, namely his hair, the solid bar shadow currently shown doesn't fit up with the actual bulk of what is casting it, giving me a sense that his hair is more of a wig then actually growing out of his head, still that's pretty minor and I bet most wouldn't even notice it.

Second, Highlights, you did an amazing job on the boots and face to create a good sense of what material they are made out of, but unfortunately the sword, and armor peices all seem to be made from the same material as the base clothing. Adding some stark pinprick highlights for a painted metal look, or bands of reflected highlights for an exposed look (which is done well in the left hip armor) can really make the fact that those parts offer some extra protection pop out a bit more.

[coming down]

clean it up

great perspective and character design, the face is the only part bothering me much, also if you clean up your sketchyness a bit that would help.

falz3333 responds:

I would like to know what you didn't like about the face

[Shonen bat]

>.>

Im actually kinda pissed at the low review scores, your work is actually pretty well done as faras shape, depth, and color go. However, a few things could be tweaked, the character in the back for instance, it doesnt seem to be behind what the front one is holding, try lowering it's contrast a little.

duplex2 responds:

Many thanks and thanks for the advices.

About the low ratings, people starts hating themselves and finish hating the others. Nothing new.

[The sky Dragon Z550]

3d fizzo

is all 3d an shiz oooooooooowned ywah if wasn't drunk would give full review but, here go, nice smoothness, problem: wing should be towards top for optimal lift requirements, take it from a guy who works on Air Force jets, also, the divits in the fusalage would create drag and make that bitch to a tail dive. Booya!!!!! Oh btw the smoothness is good for LO and anti radar shiz so keep that up for the goood modern aircraft shiz cause no more sausage craft commin of the assembly line!

ps I am drunk as a skunk in july... why july? because july RULES!!!