Artist-Lost's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Kijo! Chapter 1 [EDITED]]

Wonderful comic, thank you for sharing it. I like the clean grayscale look.

[FOXCLAW: Peacekeeper]

Love the dynamic angle you used! Fish eye can be hard to pull off.

Rochaku responds:

thank you! im glad you liked it

[Messenger]

Wonderfully done! I love nature illustrations!

[Sweet Sixteen Comic Contest Award Ceremony Comic]

Congrats to the winners, this was a fun challenge. #1 was my favorite so it was nice to see it take the win.

[Gunkpumper]

As a major Geiger bio-mechanical fan I very much enjoy this.

Gherkincacnter responds:

my man! thanks

[STARLIST Cover]

Nice cover art here. Glad to see other comic artists posting ^.^

[the up and down]

beautifully done perspective study. I especially enjoy the lit windows. The style of windows however is a bit repetitive, which is fine, but it gives me a sense that this whole area was build around the same time rather then a slowly grown city, which is great if that's what you're going for, just something to think about.

Be careful with the people sizes though, if we use the bridges in the foreground as reference on how big the people should be, then the people on the bridges in the middle ground and back right side look to be giants as they are relatively the same size rather then shrinking as they recede into distance.

[The Huntress claims her prey]

I like the line quality and contrast of this. I wont comment on the anatomy because it looks like you have an extreme stylization going on, but for the cloth work if you search "6 fold types every illustrator should know" you will find some great resources on how to make that look really good without a lot of work involved.

Dooffrie responds:

Okay! thank you.

[Sea Turtle]

very beautiful use of colors and light, the turtle's shadows feel a bit fuzzy, I know the water is creating a lot of ambiance, but it's hard to see the underside of the form which makes it clash a bit with the nice hard edges everything else has.

[Jak and Daxter]

great consistency in you lines and coloring. If you map out a point for your light source i think you will find that your shadows will be more consistent in the direction they fall, right now it kind of looks like you have a lot of light sources. Also good use of reflected light on the shadow sides of the gauntlets.